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I like Jeremy, he is a character in "You are handsome" - A Korean movie. He is a drummer in a famous boyband it is A.N.Jell. I like him because he like a baby and his character is exotic like his favorite is making nail, has a long hair. He like to make noisy, he always makes everyone happy and always smiles. He can play drum and sing very well. He also can play guitar and guitar bass. He very smart. Everyone usually call him " A boy has a eyes can smile".
Which story would you like to continue working on? Why?
I like Jeremy, he is a character in "You are handsome" - A Korean movie. He is a drummer in a famous boyband it is A.N.Jell. I like him because he like a baby and his character is exotic like his favorite is making nail, has a long hair. He like to make noisy, he always makes everyone happy and always smiles. He can play drum and sing very well. He also can play guitar and guitar bass. He very smart. Everyone usually call him " A boy has a eyes can smile".
Which story would you like to continue working on? Why?
I want to write continue this story - Describe a character in a movie you like. Because he is my idol so i interested in this story.
Why is it a good story?
Because this story suitable to me.
How can you make it better?
I will describe more about character, add more diagram, use more figurative language.
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