Today you and your classmates viewed each others personal narratives.  Your classmates gave you a lot of advice today(hopefully).  What advice do you think is the most helpful to you?  Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work? 


- The most helpful advice is about the grammar.
- Because grammar  is very important and with the advice  I know my mistake so that I will try to improve on that.
- the way classmates construct the work, ideas, the connection among the sentences and paragraphs.

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

- I had a lot of ideas, they are connected very well. The personal narrative was divided in proper paragraphs.
- The structure of the sentences was not quite correct, so i will check carefully and write this more concisely.
- Yes, it is. Because there were many ideas and i have an interesting life.
- Tense of the verb, use of verb, wrong adverb, wrong connection words. As i know my mistakes clearly i will try to think carefully before i start writing and double check after i finish.