What did you do well?                                                                                                                                                                                             I think i speak slowly, carefully and clearly

What could you improve                                                                                                                                      I need to give more fact and give more detail 

Whose speech did you enjoy the most?  Why?                                                                                                        I think is Mickey because he have a lot of idea and his voice is very good

What speech did you enjoy the most?  Why?                                                                                                                I think the insane group. Because they show a lot of idea about claim and evidence                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

What did you enjoy about debate?                                                                                                                      I think it help to know about my opinion.                           

What did you dislike?                                                                                                                                                      I scare when i stand up to talk about my idea and i scare my member sad or didn't like me when i didn't do good.                                           

Personal Narrative

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_qWJR-qmyi_Bg8OmTe5uErPFxU2V8DfO-duixvV-sJk/edit?hl=en_US

  What did you do well?  How can you improve?
I did well in showing my fellings and details. But i need to improve grammar and use more dialogue.

Today you and your classmates viewed each others personal narratives.  Your classmates gave you a lot of advice today(hopefully).  What advice do you think is the most helpful to you?  Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work? 


- The most helpful advice is about the grammar.
- Because grammar  is very important and with the advice  I know my mistake so that I will try to improve on that.
- the way classmates construct the work, ideas, the connection among the sentences and paragraphs.

Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

- I had a lot of ideas, they are connected very well. The personal narrative was divided in proper paragraphs.
- The structure of the sentences was not quite correct, so i will check carefully and write this more concisely.
- Yes, it is. Because there were many ideas and i have an interesting life.
- Tense of the verb, use of verb, wrong adverb, wrong connection words. As i know my mistakes clearly i will try to think carefully before i start writing and double check after i finish.