Today you and your classmates viewed each others personal narratives.  Your classmates gave you a lot of advice today(hopefully).  What advice do you think is the most helpful to you?  Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work? 


- The most helpful advice is about the grammar.
- Because grammar  is very important and with the advice  I know my mistake so that I will try to improve on that.
- the way classmates construct the work, ideas, the connection among the sentences and paragraphs.