Look at your test drive(personal narrative writing from last week).  Tell me what you think you did well.  How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?  Was you personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not?  What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

- I had a lot of ideas, they are connected very well. The personal narrative was divided in proper paragraphs.
- The structure of the sentences was not quite correct, so i will check carefully and write this more concisely.
- Yes, it is. Because there were many ideas and i have an interesting life.
- Tense of the verb, use of verb, wrong adverb, wrong connection words. As i know my mistakes clearly i will try to think carefully before i start writing and double check after i finish.